Kill the chart if the prose can carry it

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Step 2 of the chart decision tree is the most powerful: if the prose can carry the fact, kill the chart. 'The 26.33 is 5.87s faster than her prior 25m PB and the fastest she's ever swum in the program' is more direct than a chart showing one outlier dot. Most first-draft charts exist because the drafter didn't check whether prose could do the job cheaper. Charts earn their space by communicating patterns the eye reads faster than words — not by decorating facts that are already clear in text.

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